FIC: The Goblin King Cometh (Harry/Draco)

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Title: The Goblin King Cometh
Author: llaeyro
Prompt: PROMPT #43
Adapted from: Labyrinth
Pairing: Harry/Draco
Word Count: 10k+
Rating: NC-17
Contains (Highlight to view): *language, angst, post-Hogwarts, EWE, snarkiness, intentional mis-quoting, copious amounts of cheesiness*
Disclaimer: Harry Potter characters are the property of J.K. Rowling and Bloomsbury/Scholastic. No profit is being made, and no copyright infringement is intended.
Notes: Massive thanks to the incredible, patient makochanupdates for being an incredible beta in the face of all life has thrown at her lately and love to pendecardiel for squeeing enough to keep me going! Also, apologies to the prompter but despite setting out writing this with the intention of following the prompt in its entirety, the characters saw things ending differently!
Summary: The Goblin King is real and he's Draco Malfoy. Can Harry figure out what he really wants in time to save his godson? Not everything is as it was in the film but Harry has the help of some old friends.


The Goblin King Cometh

Comments

[eidheann_writes]

Hahahaha

Very cute. Lots of fun. I especially loved Teddy's insistance they stick to the script. ;)

[capitu]

That was super! I haven't seen this movie, but I had so much fun reading your story. So many funny bits from this! Every time Draco made an appearance, his outfits, and the bit with Hagrid. XD This was great.

[daisymaeevans.livejournal.com]

This is so much fun! Harry and Draco are both totally themselves here. Great job!

[jm9001.livejournal.com]

BAHAHAHAHA

"Harry did his best to take his eyes off of David Bowie's crotch"... So, this is pretty much the best opening line I've ever read in my life, ever. :P Seriously, with an opener like that, you know it's going to be worth reading!

This was such a good laugh (not to mention the perfect length for my ungodly long commute home).

[isinuyasha.livejournal.com]

That is soooooooooooooo awesome!!! I had such a crush on Jareth when I was a kid and seeing Draco be him makes all my dreams come true, heh :D So awesome, you made me realize what I always wanted to see adapted into a Drarry fic haha :D
Awesome work, made me want to re-watch the movie :D
Anyway, I leave everyone with this, just because :D

You remind me of a babe :D

[inkprince.livejournal.com]

I don't know where to begin to tell you how absolutely AWESOME this is!! I've always been a Labyrinth fan, since I was little, and you did justice! The changes from the original story were not only plausible, but made your story better! And Harry and Draco were weirdly in-character (in a out-of-character kinda way). ;)
and Harry wanting to be Teddy's daddy!! my heart melted! and Draco trying in every way to show Harry his true feelings! awww!
not to mention the scorching hot sex! ;)
Great job! I really think I'll be re-reading this very soon (maybe after I re-watch the movie!) ;))

Loved it!!

[fantasyfiend09.livejournal.com]

This was brilliant! I love that you had Harry and Teddy watching the film in the beginning and referencing it throughout. I especially love when Harry simply goes along with peach instead of fighting it. Your support cast was perfect. Excellent use of Kreacher, Grawp and Hagrid! The banter, flirtation, and longing between Harry and Draco was lovely, especially with the sweetness of Teddy thrown in. Great fic!

[eva667.livejournal.com]

Huge fun, giggled throughout :-)

[appleling.livejournal.com]

This was such a delight to read! It was funny, utterly adorable and very creative in terms of adapting the 'Labyrinth' universe into HP universe! I love the way you wrote little Teddy and Draco as David Bowie! So cute! I had so much fun reading this :D Thank you for sharing this with us!