Wow! This is impressive! I love the overall sinister and perverse feel to the fic. It all felt dark and raw.... and utterly absorbing! And sinfully sexy! Your characters and how well you've handled them was the sole highlight of this story! Your Bellatrix was perfect! You've made her both mad in a dark, sinister way but also so powerful and oddly lucid in her own way. Bellatrix made this story feel alive and raw, and perversely sexy in a way only someone like her could. Your Luna was beautifully written too! Luna feels so canon, so Luna and so sweet despite the circumstances she was stuck in. And Draco, so helpless, so resigned but at the same time, still unbroken in spirit was wonderful in his own way too.
Very creative rendition of a "mad tea party"! You didn't overdo it at all! Everything felt just right. I love it!
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Very creative rendition of a "mad tea party"! You didn't overdo it at all! Everything felt just right. I love it!