OMG! THISWASSOAWESOMEICAN'TEVEN. But seriously, this was so very well written, I just feel like dropping to my knees and worshipping your greatness. I LOVED the fact that this was based off of a porno (Don't Know why but it reminds me of one BoundinPublic video I'm partial to) and the way you handled all the little nuances so very perfectly. If you do write a sequel, let it be known that I will be eagerly waiting for it. :D