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Mar. 11th, 2004 10:12 am![[identity profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/openid.png)
Title Broken
Rating PG-13
Disclaimer They’re mine. All mine! You can’t have them. They belong to me…*wakes up from dream to realize they belong to JKR and WB* “Damn!”
Warnings Um, well there is some bad language. And if you don’t like to see Draco’s life practically ruined, I wouldn’t read. Unbeta-ed
General Notes This is written from Draco’s view point. So, when you read it, imagine it as if he were telling it to you. None of it is extra story narration, so if is in Italics, it means stressing or whatever you feel it should mean. At one point, I mention money. As I don’t know the symbol for pounds in England, I write the word ‘pounds’. OK?
More General Notes Grammar: I don’t claim to have perfect grammar. I slip up. But, in this story, bad grammar might be because it is supposed to be conversational. Even Malfoy doesn’t speak properly all the time. There will be times where what Draco is saying will seem contradictory. This is cuz I think that at this point in his life, he is really confused, troubled. Not to mention he doesn’t always think straight (no pun intended) around Harry.
Even More I haven’t been a fan of HP/DM slash for long so if this plot is tired, don’t tell me. Just let it die gracefully. I will gladly accept constructive criticism. Being mean is just…well, mean. So, please be humane.
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I would LOVE it if you commented. It would be very nice. That way I would know whether or not I wanted to continue on with this
Rating PG-13
Disclaimer They’re mine. All mine! You can’t have them. They belong to me…*wakes up from dream to realize they belong to JKR and WB* “Damn!”
Warnings Um, well there is some bad language. And if you don’t like to see Draco’s life practically ruined, I wouldn’t read. Unbeta-ed
General Notes This is written from Draco’s view point. So, when you read it, imagine it as if he were telling it to you. None of it is extra story narration, so if is in Italics, it means stressing or whatever you feel it should mean. At one point, I mention money. As I don’t know the symbol for pounds in England, I write the word ‘pounds’. OK?
More General Notes Grammar: I don’t claim to have perfect grammar. I slip up. But, in this story, bad grammar might be because it is supposed to be conversational. Even Malfoy doesn’t speak properly all the time. There will be times where what Draco is saying will seem contradictory. This is cuz I think that at this point in his life, he is really confused, troubled. Not to mention he doesn’t always think straight (no pun intended) around Harry.
Even More I haven’t been a fan of HP/DM slash for long so if this plot is tired, don’t tell me. Just let it die gracefully. I will gladly accept constructive criticism. Being mean is just…well, mean. So, please be humane.
( Read more... )
I would LOVE it if you commented. It would be very nice. That way I would know whether or not I wanted to continue on with this