A wanton draco fic for neon who requested v. wanton Draco. This is the first part.

[oliver1234.livejournal.com]

I dedicate this crackfic! to neon who wanted a v. wanton Draco. There are two parts and I;m not sure if there will be more or not. Read and REVIEW!

Title: Things need to change
Author: Oliver1234
Pairing: H/D
Disclaimer: DOn't own it, can't sell it, just playin with it, now get off my back!
Summary: Draco feels that the realtionship between he and Harry needs to change


http://avia.silverbloom.net/mirror/viewstory.php?sid=10219


You can also check out my other stories on aff.net. Swing, and Naive are both h/d and naive has two chaps so far, and swing has one.

Comments

[-----neon.livejournal.com]

I have not read it but OMG HAVE MY BEBBEHS haha :D <3

[memorycafe.livejournal.com]

I think that you would find that both your number of readers and comprehensive reviews would be greatly increased if you simply ran your story through a quick spell-checker before posting it. It only takes about five minutes and makes it much easier on the reader. It's hard to judge a story by its actual content when it's riddled with spelling and grammatical errors.

If you for some reason don't like using the spell check function, or don't have a program with it on your computer, you might want to consider a beta reader. You can find some very excellent ones over at the Seekers section in FictionAlley Park (http://forums.fictionalley.org/park/forumdisplay.php?s=2ba455f4a12eba76e7beadb979c98f1a&forumid=18).

Best of luck.