Thanks. Good point there. When I read this review, I went back over the fic and you're right. It needs a kick. Hmmm.... *Thinks* I'll add something to it when my brain is working. I was thinking of maybe adding more... hmm... maybe I could do more?? Like a bit of smut? lol.
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Date: 2004-01-30 03:46 pm (UTC)