Date: 2010-03-04 01:04 am (UTC)
You made Greyback sound cute, initially, and then he got scary again. o.O Brilliant ploy on his part, though. D: I like how, even towards the end, Draco didn't know how to feel. I got the feeling he might've been crying over Greyback's death, or because of the ordeal of almost being raped. Great job - I liked this piece. :D
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