I liked the story itself but I was completely wincing at the sex scene.

As I've been told by a gay male friend: "Anal sex without lube is like having your dick rubbed raw and then torn off." Seriously, on the bottom's side, there were do ruptured blood vessels and possibly tearing, on the top's skin burn. For an example of the effect, go out to your car, turn on windshield wipers, do not use water. Listen to the sound and watch. That's what it's like.

If you know anyone who has had non-lubed anal sex that wasn't incredibly painful, please tell me. I'm completely willing to change my opinion because of factual experience.

Otherwise, I found the story amusing and cute.

- Andrea.