What I absolutely adore about this fic - apart from the excrutiatingly hot frotting on Draco's 15th birthday :) - is how you draw us into Harry's pov, and at least I read it with no thought about how Draco must have felt after waking up. Only when you have Draco state how heart-broken he was, did it hit me how obtuse Harry had been. Really, both their views make so much sense, and I am glad you had them work it out in the end. I loved Harry's line about Draco flying amazingly, and Draco's unbelieving and almost shy reaction to it. :)
re: Forest for the Trees
Date: 2010-11-13 02:50 am (UTC)