This is beautiful and very sad - I got a little choked up. I love how you told the whole story through the lens of that one scene of Draco entering their room and tidying it up. Both of them are perfect too.
God, that scene of them making love for the first time! So beautifully written. Whatever it was Draco had ultimately said must have been truly awful to wash that memory away.
Okay, I'm now going to My Happy Place where they get back together :)
LOL, don't listen to me. It ended exactly how it should have. Wonderful story. Thank you for writing & sharing.
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Date: 2010-11-20 06:14 pm (UTC)God, that scene of them making love for the first time! So beautifully written. Whatever it was Draco had ultimately said must have been truly awful to wash that memory away.
Okay, I'm now going to My Happy Place where they get back together :)
LOL, don't listen to me. It ended exactly how it should have. Wonderful story. Thank you for writing & sharing.