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Title: Sucker Love
Author: Teri
Genre: Drabble, porn
Rating: R/NC-17ish
Pairing: Harry/Draco, bottom!draco
Warnings: boy!sex... and that's about it.
Summary: 'There are no words exchanged. Only grunts, gasps, moans, whimpers. Nothing complicated. Nothing that changes anything between them. You punch Harry, you get a moan. You fuck Draco, you get a gasp.'

Sucker love is heaven sent

Comments

[flimsy.livejournal.com]

(I would have commented in your journal, but you set it to friends-only-comment, so I'm posting this here)



I loved this. Seriously, I did.
I liked how left a lot of things unsaid, sentences incomplete - that added to the tension.

Any form of conversation is always left at the doorway, along with their clothing.

That is my favourite part. I don't know why. It simply describes the relationship they're having so very well - this unspoken rule not to talk, that Draco eventually breaks. Lovely.


Thank you for sharing. <3

[vanilla-milk.livejournal.com]

Hey! Changed my journal so that registered users can post (completely forgot I set it to friends only *doink*)

Thank you so much for the comment - and the constructive crit - I guess I was thinking of old leather. Le sigh. I shall change it! (This is why I need a beta... lol)

And, by the by, LOVING your JRM icon. He is sex.