I wrote a fic!!!!

[draconislover.livejournal.com]

sooo I WROTE MY FIRST FIC! YAY! ahem... anyway i wrote this in class cause i didnt want to take notes and I'm sorry if its bad but... it's my first so be nice but also be honest tell me what you think! thanks here it is!

Summery: Harry and Draco fight over Harry's peice of cake but Draco knows how to make him cave!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6949588/1/Chocolate_cake  sorry its not pretty i dont know how to do that yet!
didnt know what to tag it as either so again sorry!

Comments

[crazyparakiss.livejournal.com]

Cute, good go at a first fic! Now two suggestions, first since you talk about pounding ass I'd change the rating to PG, possibly PG-13, just so as not to get in trouble, you know. Also ass should be arse. I think ass is more like a donkey to people in the UK. :) Other than that I thought it was cute and a nice little ficlet for a first go! KEEP IT UP! Fandom needs more H/D :D

[draconislover.livejournal.com]

OMG Thanks your my first reveiwer lol thanks for the corrections i just wrote it in class so it looked like i was taking notes and it really didnt start out with the ass pounding but idk i just put it in there lol wasnt thinking thanks again eep!

[crazyparakiss.livejournal.com]

:)

[talekayler.livejournal.com]

Hee hee hee, that is hopelessly cute. ♥ And yay for being sneaky in class! That's totally what I'd be doing, but now I'm just stuck with doing it at work. Write more!

If you want to "make it pretty", this is the HTML code for the link:

<*a href="URL LINK HERE">Text, ex, Chocolate Cake<*/a> All you have to do is remove the *'s, and you're all set!

[draconislover.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I love being sneaky lol! THANK YOU FOR THE REVEIW!!!

[sabinefrappe.livejournal.com]

Super cute! Of course Harry would have to give in with THAT threat!

[draconislover.livejournal.com]

I know who wouldn't! but i can't beleive he didn't give in to the puppy dog face whats wrong with him! THANK YOU FOR REVEIWING EEP!!!