FIC: Doll Parts, Snape/Draco, NC-17

[charlotteschaos.livejournal.com]

[Title] Doll Parts
[Pairing] Snape/Draco, Nott/Draco
[Rating] NC-17
[Disclaimer] Characters are the property of JK Rowling.
[Word Count] 10,625
[Author] charlotteschaos
[Editor] cravache
[Betas] teh_del & araythea
[Summary] Snape thinks himself so clever. He thinks he has me right where he wants me.
[Warnings] Dubious to non-consent, cross-dressing, abuse, angst, character death, infidelity, dark fic.
[Notes] At the end.


Link to an external archive because I wanted you to change pages per entry as you would a journal.

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Comments

[save-le-empire.livejournal.com]

I found a few grammar/spelling mistakes, but figured you would find them soon enough. But this one is quite large,

He told me I was too much of a girl to be the head of my household as I should be, that I couldn't take care of myself, that I was like a woman and that therefore I should dress like one. He grabbed me by my hair and threw me at the bed. I grabbed for my wand, but he'd summoned it before I could get any hexes out. Now I'd failed everyone. Mum was dead, father in prison, and Snape... I'd failed him, too.

He told me I was too much of a girl to be the head of my household as I should be, that I couldn't take care of myself, that I was like a woman and that therefore I should dress like one. He grabbed me by my hair and threw me at the bed. I grabbed for my wand, but again I failed. I wasn't fast enough. He'd summoned it before I could get any jinxes out.

It's doubled and changed. This is in June 19, 1997.

Ah, and this:

I can't get taste of Snape out of my mouth.

From November 8, 1997

My scalp has gotten rather numb to it; I suppose any more I just expect it.

From June 9, 1998

Regardless of all that, it was wonderful, dear. I (a natural basis ;) ) adored the fact that 'Scarhead' kept flirting with him. And I was always a sucker on Draco's dramatics when it came to getting back. Fireballs and fists of dirt is JUST like him.

The way you told the story through Draco's journal must have been frustrating, but you managed to put in all the information even through his personal reflections and what it is he would and would not likely write in the journal.

Muchos kudos, hun. <3

[charlotteschaos.livejournal.com]

Thanks for pointing those out. Haha, 3 betas and me going over it... but alas ;)

I'm obviously a bit of a H/D shipper, although a lot of why I kept Harry in the mix was just because Draco so often goes so out of his way to irritate Harry, I didn't think he'd stop keeping an eye on him. Nor reporting on whatever attentions he got from him ;)

It was a frustrating way to tellt he story, but I like challenges.

Thanks for reading and commenting and pointing out edits. I hate walking around with egg on my tie ;)