[identity profile] snuffylicious.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] bottom_draco
[ Title ] Something New
[ Author ] [livejournal.com profile] snuffylicious
[ Rating ] NC-17
[ Genre ] smut
[ Pairing ] Harry Potter/Draco Malfoy
[ Notes ] This was made for [livejournal.com profile] xingou's rimming contest. It's also experimental. There's only dialog, no narration, which makes me somewhat hesitant to give it an NC-17 rating...
[ Archiving ] As always, e-mail me for permissions in archiving, or at least leave a comment.

"Let's try something new tonight."

"New?"

"Yeah, new."

"Why? What's wrong with things the way they are?"

"Nothing, I didn't say anything was wrong."

"Then why do you want to try 'something new?'"

"Jesus, Draco, you're so defensive. What's wrong with a little experimentation in our sex life? It's healthy. Not to mention fun."

"Defensive? I'm not defensive."

"Except you are."

"Shut up, Potter."

"Come on."

"No."

"Please?"

"No."

"Pretty please?"

"No."

"I promise you'll like it."

"That's what you said last time."

"Hey, that wasn't my fault. How was I supposed to know that people walk through graveyards at 2 AM?"

"Oh, don't even start. That was entirely your fault and you know it."

"Come on, come on, come on! This doesn't have anything to do with that, anyway!"

"No! And nothing you say will convince me otherwise."

"I'll use the cherry lube."

"..."

"The magical, vibrating kind."

"... I want to hate you so much."

"So you'll give it a shot?"

"Not that I even know what 'it' is, but -- I guess I've been bribed into submission."

"Great! I know you'll love it."

"He said."

"Don't be such a pessimist..."

"I'm not a pessimist, I'm a realist. There's a diff-- ooh, Harry..."

"Mmm. I always know the right spots to hit with you."

"You most certainly -- aah! -- do..."

"Get that shirt off, Malfoy; it's in the way."

"Ooh... yes, sir."

"My lovely little pale angel... I just wish I could fall in love with you again and again."

"C'mere, you--"

"Mmnph--"

"Aah... Harry..."

"Mmm, do you like that?"

"No, I hate it. That's why I'm -- ohGodHarryharder -- writhing under... neath..."

"Oh, fuck... you shaved? Fuck, Draco, you have no idea how hot that is."

"Shut up and do something! I'm dying, here!"

"Gladly..."

"Ah... ah... oh, shit... God, yes, Harry... God in heaven, I -- oh, that thing with your tongue, you know I love it -- oh-ooh -- oh, my God, that feels-- what the fuck are you doing?!"

"You said we could try something new!"

"Yeah, but I wasn't expecting that!"

"Come on, just give it a chance!"

"Harry, that's obscene!"

"It's not obscene! I know you're like it, come on!"

"But it's just -- the whole idea --!"

"Rimming, Draco. It's called rimming. And I know you'll like it if you just give it a chance."

"I don't know..."

"Come on. Please?"

"Aah! Oh, you dirty, rotten little --"

"-- stunningly handsome Gryffindor?"

"Let's not jump to conclusions."

"Come on, beautiful. Just lie back... that's right... spread your legs for me. That's a good angel."

"Damnit, I just don't get you. What is it with you and your fixation on my -- Oh, my God--"

"See?"

"Shut up. ... Ah... oh, God... Harry, that feels... aaahh... Oh, my God. Oh, fuck, yes... Ha-a-a-rry, go deeper, please, I -- oh!! Oh, God! Aahhnn--aah! Yes, oh, God, yes... ohGodHarrypleaseIcan'ttakemuchmoreofthissssssssss..."

"... God, Draco, I wish you could see yourself. I'm so turned on right now... I'll do whatever you want, angel. Just name it."

"Just... shut up... and fuck me... you menace."

"Your wish is my command..."

"And don't forget the cherry lube, you cheapskate."

X-Posted up the wazzo. Sorry if you get a jillion times.

Date: 2005-10-23 04:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kirili.livejournal.com
LOL


perfect :D.

Date: 2005-10-23 04:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kehpropg13.livejournal.com
OMG! I so heart your right now!

Date: 2005-10-23 05:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bonfoi.livejournal.com
Now this is a finishing line: "And don't forget the cherry lube, you cheapskate." *snicker*

Date: 2005-10-23 06:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] suyari.livejournal.com
"And don't forget the cherry lube, you cheapskate."

Haha! Draco, still so focussed...Harry ought to fix that.
;p

Date: 2005-10-23 06:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] enchanted-jae.livejournal.com
Rimming is still just a wee bit of a squick for me (I'm trying, see? I'm reading it!), but the way you handled it, all in dialogue, was brilliant!

*feels self being sloooowly pulled into the rimming cult*

Angel

Date: 2005-10-23 07:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] idamonae.livejournal.com
Angel

*squeee!*
Oh, you won me over completely with that word. I *heart* it. This was fabulous. I think you've done a decent job with tackling this using only dialogue. Very nice!

Date: 2005-10-23 05:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] save-le-empire.livejournal.com
*ded*

♥ love, so hot. Guh, dialogue-

*ded again*

Date: 2005-10-26 12:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] echoxthexnymph.livejournal.com
I LOVE YOU! I LOVE THIS! You win at life.

Date: 2005-10-29 05:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pervy-fairy.livejournal.com
*giggles like a loony thingy*
That was fucking brilliant!
"Hey, that wasn't my fault. How was I supposed to know that people walk through graveyards at 2 AM?" *cackles*

Best line ever! ->"Just... shut up... and fuck me... you menace."

Image

Cherry lube = Love

*leers*

Date: 2005-10-31 05:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fearlesssisters.livejournal.com
fantastic and very ho! i love it!!!!!!!! please write a sequel. :)

Date: 2005-11-11 01:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] enablelove.livejournal.com
haha...just saw this...excellent...loved it alot!!!

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