I Will Always Love You

[chris0ng.livejournal.com]

Mmm... I'm not really sure I'm posting this correctly... >.>  Sorry if I did anything wrong... Still don't understand how to link people to a certain page ^^

Title : I Will Always Love You
Rating : M as of the moment :D
Pairing : Harry/Draco (Dom/Sub... We all <3 that, don't we? ^^) Will have a bit of OtherCharacters/Draco
Warning : Abuse
Story Summary : Can't say until after I post the second part of the Prologue
Chapter Summary : Harry learns that jumping to conclusions can bring about dire consequences...

Link me!

Grar~

FWP (FF.net) / Chris0ng (LJ)

Comments

Attack of the grammar Nazi!

[free-the-goats.livejournal.com]

Okay, I saw this, and I immediately have to say something before I read anymore into the fic. (God, I feel like such a meanie...)

Your end quotations are either missing punctuation or are switched. Its a common error, but its a very obvious one.

Example.

"Cheese is smelly" Wrong.
"Cheese is smelly". Wrong.
"Cheese is smelly." Right!

If there is a lead in, you put a comma, example
"Cheese is smelly," said Bob. Right!
"Cheese is smelly" said Bob. Wrong.


I am sorry to pick, don't hate me. Here, have a pirate smiley face.

!-) (Its an eyepatch, not a wink!)

Re: Attack of the grammar Nazi!

[chris0ng.livejournal.com]

LoL, I know I know... Grammar Nazi *Giggles like a hyena*

Cute X3

Yes, I know it's a problem of mine and I also know the correct punctuation >.< But seeing a period at the end of conversation sentences annoy me to no end :D *Too much Archie comics influence... They NEVER put periods* Ionno... It's my personal choice, really, to write it that way ^^

Thanks for the second tip! There are many many times I forget to add the coma >.>

Pirate Smiley face! Cute!

~ FWP / Chris0ng