FEST FIC: Tossing and Turning - Harry/Draco (NC-17)

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Title: Tossing and Turning
Author: okydoky
Prompt: #5, The Princess and The Pea
Rating: NC-17
Pairing(s): Harry/Draco
Summary: Harry reflects on his relationship with Draco after he disappears, and then returns, dirty and disheveled.
Disclaimer: This is a work of fanfiction set in the Harry Potter universe – all recognisable characters and settings are the property of J. K. Rowling and her associates. No copyright infringement is intended. No profit is made from this work. Please observe your local laws with regards to the age-limit and content of this work
Warning(s): None.
Word Count: 1,200.
Author's Notes: Thank you so much to my beta leela_cat!

Tossing and Turning

Comments

[girlofavalon.livejournal.com]

OMG! This is perfect. Was I really supposed to have the horrible thoughts I had about what happened to Draco while he was gone?

[okydoky.livejournal.com]

Thank you! Yes you were, haha. Apologies for the late reply. ♥

[aquila-star.livejournal.com]

I love how Harry knew it was Draco. Too priceless. :D

[okydoky.livejournal.com]

Thank you! :D Apologies for the late reply. ♥

[sony-kit82.livejournal.com]

that was a very creative, realistic and painful take on the prompt. the running comments inside harry's head were unnerving, anguishing, and hopeful simultaneously. i liked how draco's return, especially after he revealed where he was, was accepted without tension as it indicated how much harry wanted draco back. the last part on harry calling draco princess was very sweet. :D

[okydoky.livejournal.com]

Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it :) Apologies for the late reply. ♥

[ayurubie.livejournal.com]

yay! the fest started.. first fic to read.. i mus say its realistic and kinda makes me wonder on what happend to Draco for the last 3 months.

[okydoky.livejournal.com]

Apologies for the late reply. ♥ Thanks so much :)

[alisanne.livejournal.com]

Hehehe.
Princess Draco? *g*
Cute.
It was nice to see them work it out. :)

[okydoky.livejournal.com]

Apologies for the late reply. ♥ Thanks so much! :D

[bgreenwivy.livejournal.com]

That was an awesome untraditional take on an old classic. Awesome job!

[okydoky.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :D Apologies for the late reply. ♥

[likeasongsong.livejournal.com]

What a sweet piece!

[okydoky.livejournal.com]

Thank you. Apologies for the late reply. ♥

[silva-draconis.livejournal.com]

How to describe this one, it's just fantastic really. the fact that they are still Malfoy and Potter.

Well done.

[okydoky.livejournal.com]

Thanks so much! *hugs* Apologies for the late reply. ♥

[ura-hd.livejournal.com]

veru cute

[okydoky.livejournal.com]

Thank you! :D Apologies for the late reply. ♥

[serilla.livejournal.com]

Love this - especially how it's Harry narrating the story. Like how it was an argument about the bed that led to Draco leaving and how it is the bed again that Harry realises it really is Draco. Great story. :)

[okydoky.livejournal.com]

Thank you :) I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Apologies for the late reply. ♥

[okydoky.livejournal.com]

Thank you! Apologies for the late reply. ♥

[darkestnight12.livejournal.com]

I love how you managed to make a Harry/Draco rendition of the Princess and the Pea without making it an AU.

;D Of course, the deciding factor of Draco's identity is the bed, huh? You can take the Draco out of the princess but you can't take the princess out of the Draco. *laughs* Did that even make any sense? It made more sense in my head. *cough* Anyways, ^^;; two thumbs up!

[okydoky.livejournal.com]

Haha, it did make sense yes :) Thanks so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Apologies for the late reply. ♥

[littlemslondon.livejournal.com]

I love that! It just feels so real, and what a creative twist on the prompt! I'm always wondering how you authors come up with such inventive ideas. :)

[okydoky.livejournal.com]

Thank you! What a lovely comment. Apologies for the late reply. ♥

[hurdyburdy.livejournal.com]

Nicely written and a touching story.

[okydoky.livejournal.com]

Thank you! :) Apologies for the late reply. ♥

[citrus-lime.livejournal.com]

Oh my, I wonder what happened with Draco when he was missing! D:

Good job, author! <3

[okydoky.livejournal.com]

Thanks so much! :D Apologies for the late reply. ♥

[galad222000.livejournal.com]

Nice take on the prompt and I love Princess Draco. Left wondering why did he leave, what happened, why did he come back?

[okydoky.livejournal.com]

I'm so glad you enjoyed it :) Apologies for the late reply. ♥

[les-lenne.livejournal.com]

The length was just perfect to tear your up and the narration by Harry made it so much more frightening. God, such a sad story in the morning. But, it's lovely. ♥

[okydoky.livejournal.com]

I'm glad you thought the length was appropraite! It just didn't want to be longer :) Apologies for the late reply. ♥ Thank you! :D

[nursedarry.livejournal.com]

Wow! That was gorgeous, sad, sweet, clever, funny and omg so in-character I almost cried. I love the reflection on their use of first and surnames.

[okydoky.livejournal.com]

Thanks so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Apologies for the late reply. ♥

[westkitsune.livejournal.com]

That was utterly canon and utterly Harry and Draco. I love how in-character they are, and how the prompt was so creatively used. It's sad that Harry did not look for Draco, considering he's the type to "save before he thinks" but I like how the dynamics is different with regards to Draco anyway.

And the ending line was absolutely perfect. Good job mystery author! ;D

[okydoky.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much, what a lovely comment. Apologies for the late reply. ♥

[enchanted-jae.livejournal.com]

The story is hot and lovely as is, but it makes me wish I knew more about what happened in the time that Draco was gone. *wistful sigh* Ah, but that's what imagination is for, yeah?

[okydoky.livejournal.com]

Thanks so much :) Apologies for the late reply. ♥

[hangdab.livejournal.com]

Nicely done! Thank you...

[okydoky.livejournal.com]

Thank you! Apologies for the late reply. ♥

[joyceyhlin.livejournal.com]

It was a rather clever twist on the original story. Princess Draco was simply priceless.

[okydoky.livejournal.com]

Thanks so much :) I'm glad you enjoyed it. Apologies for the late reply. ♥

[quill-lumos.livejournal.com]

Draco is such a princess, beautifully realised.

*hugs*

Lucie xx

[okydoky.livejournal.com]

Thank you :) Apologies for the late reply. ♥

[yaoi-ezi.livejournal.com]

That was a darling story. Loved Draco's snarkiness about the bed

[okydoky.livejournal.com]

Thanks so much! :D Apologies for the late reply. ♥

[sra-danvers.livejournal.com]

I love the way you present Harry and Draco relationship. Always the enemies, always atraction between them.

Thanks!

[okydoky.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much :) I'm glad you enjoyed it. Apologies for the late reply. ♥