FEST FIC: His Father's Keeper - Harry/Draco, Lucius/Draco (PG-13)

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Title: His Father's Keeper
Author: elfflame
Prompt: #3, The King Who Wished to Marry His Daughter and Catskin
Pairing(s): Harry/Draco, Lucius/Draco
Summary: When the Malfoys withdraw from society after the war, Harry wants to find out why.
Rating: PG13 for implications
Disclaimer: This story not intended to infringe, no money is being made. The characters and places do not belong to me. I’m just borrowing them for a bit.
Warning(s): Implication of murder and incest
Word Count: 11,538
Author's Notes: Apparently I am incapable of small stories right now. Thank you to C and K for all their help in hand-holding and Betaing. I hope everyone will enjoy!

His Father's Keeper

Comments

[ayurubie.livejournal.com]

what a great way to wake up :)

[elfflame]

Thank you! :)

[brknhalo241.livejournal.com]

Very intriguing story....I would love to see this also from Draco's POV......with Narcissa's death and Lucius' decline, Harry's stubbornness....I'm thinking it would be just as intriguing. I liked when Harry realized his decision to break up with Ginny really was for the right reasons....

[elfflame]

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Normally, Draco would be my usual choice for POV, but this one needed to be from Harry's to make it more of a mystery as to what had happened. Hence the two povs, rather than just one.

[monster-o-love.livejournal.com]

That was a very lovely and rather sad story, I completely enjoyed it!!! It was awesome that Harry's 'obsession' was actually the key to Draco getting the help that he needed. Loved the ending, so very sweet!! :)

[elfflame]

Thank you so much for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[hangdab.livejournal.com]

It's all good, in the end...

[elfflame]

I'm just a sap for happy endings. :D

[darkestnight12.livejournal.com]

This was AWESOME! I LOVED~ it! ;D Harry obsessively stalking Draco through the newspapers is SO true! And Draco in the end...*giggles* was adorable!

Kissing is always the perfect way to end fairytales.

[elfflame]

:D Thank you so much. This comment absolutely made my day. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

[frigus-et-nox.livejournal.com]

I liked this Draco! I like the stories where he is close to his father and his mother and is ready to do/sacrifice everything for them! Thank you very much!

[elfflame]

Thank you! I'm glad I'm not the only one who likes him this way.

[joyceyhlin.livejournal.com]

Such a sweet ending!! Harry's obsession with Draco was pretty was well portraited as well.
And I can't agree more with Harry's reason to break up with Ginny. *giggles*

[elfflame]

:D Thank you so much. I'm very glad you enjoyed it.

[fancypantsdylan.livejournal.com]

This was so heart breaking. I love how you handled the whole *incest* aspect of the story, it was very sensitively done. A firm favourite.

[elfflame]

Thank you so much. I wanted to downplay that bit, so I'm glad it worked well. :)

[serilla.livejournal.com]

Wow! Obsession, madness, heartbreak and so much more - this story had everything. Harrys's obsession with Draco, thinking that he is up to no good leads him to something totally unexpected and Draco unwilling to give his family up ends up trapped doing the unexpected. Great story. :)

[elfflame]

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. I had a great time writing it, and it's nice to know others enjoyed it as much.

[sony-kit82.livejournal.com]

i felt so sad for draco. his blind desperation and determination to keep his father safe was almost scary. i loved harry's persistence and their first kiss was well-timed. the passion beneath draco's denial and harry's ready admission complemented each other. i felt, though, that the scenes after their first kiss were rushed, especially after how wonderfully detailed the premises of the story were established. especially liked the last scene where draco drops by harry's place because he seemed more like the draco we love: snark, sarcastic wit, passion and all.

[elfflame]

I'm sorry bits felt a bit rushed, but I'm glad you enjoyed it over all, and that you liked my Draco. I'm very fond of him. ;)

[reicheruchan.livejournal.com]

awesome!!!!!!

[elfflame]

Thanks.

[asdjhk.livejournal.com]

I really enjoyed that. Harry's 'obsession', Draco's denial, and, well, everything was really well done. Thank you for choosing that prompt and participating! ♥

[elfflame]

Thank you so much for the comment. I'm glad you enjoyed it.