FEST FIC: The One Mistake That Turned Right - Harry/Draco (PG)

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Title: The one mistake that turned right
Author: ran_mouri
Prompt: #2 (Disney's Hercules)
Pairing(s): HarryxDraco
Summary:During his last year at Hogwarts, Harry makes a mistake and gets an eye-oppener in return.
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: I don't own Harry Potter, nor its characters or situations, all content is sole property of its respective owners.
Warning(s): Disregards epilogue, made up seventh year.
Word Count: 6000+
Author's Notes: I don't think I managed a fairy tale in itself, to be honest the prompt gave me an idea and I just let it run. I hope I'm not disappointing anyone.

The One Mistake That Turned Right

Comments

[reicheruchan.livejournal.com]

so sweet~~~~~!

[fauxpersonae007.livejournal.com]

That was excellent. And the last lines were perfect. I adored it.

[darkestnight12.livejournal.com]

The was absolutely perfect. I love how you dropped hints for the readers to know that Harry is in love with Draco but he himself has yet to realize that. Also the little extra that Neville is also in love (?) with Draco was awesome but a little sad because...it's Harry/Draco. ;P

P.S. I adore Draco's glasses. *grins*

[yellownovella.livejournal.com]

OMG!!!! I loveloveloveloveloveLOVE this!!!
The ending is just so NICE and FLUFFY and FULL OF WIN!!!
WOOHOO!

[frigus-et-nox.livejournal.com]

I’m personally not disappointed at all. On the contrary I read it with pleasure. You know I’ve always thought that Slytherins’ life will not be easy after the war and their protest was the best and the bravest thing they could do. And Snape taking care of his students was great!
Harry made the right choice! If Neville had married Draco, he would have never let him go, even if Harry had realized his mistake later.

I love it!!

[alhena-mira.livejournal.com]

It was great and now I´m craving some Neville/Draco LOL

[sony-kit82.livejournal.com]

that was such a wonderful read. my heart went out to the slytherins. the premise was very original and carefully woven into the HP universe. everything was so believable and vividly described that it was not difficult to see it really happening. the rally scene, or what is to me a revolution, was both painful and inspiring. the passion, determination and sincerity with which they protested was made even more touching by the fear, desperation and hesitations they tried so hard to hide.

i liked how harry and draco's "relationship" started and came full circle to pureblood traditions, beginning with hand signals easily misconstrued as something else and ending with draco's supposed engagement to neville. everything was well-panned out. loved how harry's strong denial subtly evolved into intense admission. draco was such a great character, his unselfish heart skillfully cloaked with deceptively selfish actions. :D

[serilla.livejournal.com]

Really like this - great premise (I like the idea of with the Light winning the war pureblood traditions get pushed to the side and therefore seen as unimportant). Great story. :)

[westkitsune.livejournal.com]

Maybe she had realized that, without Voldemort, there was nothing standing between her and this fortunately homosexual fountain of knowledge.

EPIC LINE. ♥

Gorgeous description of Slytherin, and love glasses!Draco!~ I wish it was mire detailed on what happens next, but the description is enough to start to feed my own plot bunnies in my head regarding the next events!

Thank you ;3

[(Anonymous)]

omg, i love this story, is so sweet.... i feel a little sorry for Neville, he and Draco will be a great couple, but Harry and Draco are greater.

*loves*

[takarai-karin.livejournal.com]

Just resurfaced after a grueling job-training and the first fic I read was so depressing I ended up crying. Very draining. This was the perfect cheer-me-up fic! So adorable, and I love everybody in this, even the secondary characters.

The Slytherins protesting on the pitch was awesome. I reckon teaching Slytherins of muggle laws and politics might resulted in frighteningly competent lawyers and politicians. Awesome thoughts, that.

Thank you for sharing this work,

[selenesd.livejournal.com]

Awww, I always enjoy an oblivious Harry =) Partly because it's canon and partly because it's cute when he realises he loves Draco. I enjoyed this story a lot and was really proud when the Slytherins defended their traditions.

the one mistake that turned right

[(Anonymous)]

Fantastic fic. You've done a great job!

[cynaga.livejournal.com]

sweet!

[snickerchick.livejournal.com]

Such a cute story.
The thought of Draco walking around the castle with a Blackberry is so cute too. hehe.
Love the story. Great job!

[puppyxkitten.livejournal.com]

I can't get to the story! Is there another link I could access?

[bottomdraco-mod.livejournal.com]

The broken link has just been fixed. Try again and see if you could access it this time?

[bella526.livejournal.com]

The story can be found on fanfiction.net just search for the story & author on google. :)

[bottomdraco-mod.livejournal.com]

Thanks for the tip. The broken has now been fixed :D

[bella526.livejournal.com]

Great! :)

[sexiluve.livejournal.com]

Am I the only one who died laughing when Harry found out what those gestures meant? It was so funny. But I'm happy that someone wrote about Harry making a magical mistake because he does not know Wizarding traditions. I make sense; anyone inersing themselves in a new culture will make mistakes. This was a fun read!

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[mira rhaine (from livejournal.com)]

I love this fic! Such a gem!