FEST FIC: Cake and Chocolate - Harry/Draco (NC-17)

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Title: Cake and Chocolate
Author: fantasyfruitbat
Prompt: #46, Snow White
Pairing(s): Harry/Draco, Ron/Hermione, Narcissa/???
Summary: Draco has everything he thinks he wants. An attempted murder, however, brings him far more than he had ever expected.
Rating: NC17
Disclaimer: Harry Potter does not belong to me; I’m just having fun playing with the characters.
Beta: Anna, who’s not on LJ.
Warning(s): Bit of smut at the end; I don’t think there’s anything squicky.
Word Count: ~8600
Author's Notes: Set AU post-War (no HBP or DH). I really really enjoyed writing this; I hope you like what I’ve done with it.



Cake and Chocolate

Comments

[reicheruchan.livejournal.com]

love it!!!!!! draco is so cute!

[fantasyfruitbat.livejournal.com]

Thank you!! He is, isn't he?

[flaminia-x.livejournal.com]

That. Was. Adorable! Totally loved it - evil-stepfather!Snape, chocolate-loving Draco, and the letters to Pansy were really cute. Nicely done.

[fantasyfruitbat.livejournal.com]

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!

[westkitsune.livejournal.com]

LOL at Draco's allowance not being enough for his shopping xD He remained in character throughout the fic!

I got confused at first with the forest scene, but had an ephiphany why when it was finally explained xD The one responsible for everything came as a shock too, so applaud for that ♥

And TV containing gorgeous men = EPIC.

[fantasyfruitbat.livejournal.com]

Thanks! Draco does love his gorgeous men (especially Harry)!!

[nursedarry.livejournal.com]

I have HUGE love for this - chocolate, gay Charlie (yea!), married to each other (huzzah!), rubbing noses together (sweet) and love Pansy, Hermione and Narcissa as well. Brava!

[fantasyfruitbat.livejournal.com]

Thank you!! Glad you enjoyed it!

[chrisvel.livejournal.com]

Oh, this is such a wonderful retelling of Snow White.
Snape as the bad step mother, great ... it was a really good read.

[fantasyfruitbat.livejournal.com]

Thank you very much!!

[aquila-star.livejournal.com]

This was just wonderful. A very good twisting of the tale, with much Harry/Draco love. :D

[fantasyfruitbat.livejournal.com]

Thank you! Glad you liked it!

[monster-o-love.livejournal.com]

Eeeek!!! That was just such a brilliantly ADORABLE fairy tale I just want to read it all over again even though I've just finished it!!! ...while eating a piece of chocolate cake! lolz Love Draco's chocolate fetish and his letters to Pansy, soooo cute! And Harry is most definitely the charming, dashing prince! Such a hot, sexy ending too! Wonderful storytelling!!! *hugs*

[fantasyfruitbat.livejournal.com]

Thank you very much! Everyone needs a heroic prince like Harry!

[fauxpersonae007.livejournal.com]

This was fantastically cute and just too lovely for words. Excellent job.

[fantasyfruitbat.livejournal.com]

Thank you!!

[darkestnight12.livejournal.com]

The chocolate-addicted!Draco was adorable. And the indulgent!Harry was delectable. fearsomewrathofmother!Narcissa was KICKASS. Snape being the evil!husband was unexpected, really. o_O Ending was sweet!

All in all, LOVED IT~!

[fantasyfruitbat.livejournal.com]

Thanks! Narcissa is definitely a mother dragon where Draco is concerned!

[sony-kit82.livejournal.com]

can draco spell cute or adorable? apparently he can in your fic. loved the premise, it was original and very plausible in reality. erm, some spelling errors though.

elaborating on harry's hero complex was so interjected with draco's incessant in-the-head commentaries that it never got annoying but rather had gotten amusing to read. the baking was such a surprise and totally fun to read - draco's obsession with cake and chocolate was just adorable, and with an indulgent harry spoiling an unknowingly-being-cute draco, it was perfect. snape's scene was kinda creepy to read, despite the hilarity of some of the dialogue. narcissa proves to be a force to reckon with. loved the ending, great start for a happily ever after.:D

[fantasyfruitbat.livejournal.com]

Thank you very much! I'm sure their happily ever after will be full of cake and chocolate!

[fancypantsdylan.livejournal.com]

I totally loved this, Draco was so cute as the damsel in distress and I just adored how Narcissa handled Snape. Brilliant :D

[fantasyfruitbat.livejournal.com]

Thank you! Snape hadn't expected the wrath of Narcissa!

Sqeeeeaaaaa!!!!

[nimue-8.livejournal.com]

This is my prompt! Thank you so much!

I love what you did with it! The magical atmosphere, the fairy tale vibe.

Draco is exactly how I wanted him! Adorable and witty but not necessarily kind at the beginning. Definitly with a better heart once he goes through the "scary"forest and that he experiments Harry's love.

I loved your Harry, strong and kind-hearted. It's amusing that, even though the story is not from his point of view, we understand quickly that he feels for Draco!

Aaw! And Draco is the only one who ever made it through his hidden cottage (and heart) despite the wards!

I liked your Weasleys and Hermione. As for Narcissa, she really is the fierce mother we know from canon.

Thank you for the fun read and for indulging my kinks!

Re: Sqeeeeaaaaa!!!!

[fantasyfruitbat.livejournal.com]

:D I'm glad you enjoyed reading it - I had great fun writing it!

Draco certainly got his reward for making it through the forest - a handsome hero and happily ever after!

I think an angry Narcissa would be very scary - I almost felt sorry for Snape at the end!

[twistedm.livejournal.com]

SO stinkin' CUTE!!

[fantasyfruitbat.livejournal.com]

:D Thanks!!

[serilla.livejournal.com]

What a wonderful story - it was just great. Chocolate (in all its forms) addicted Draco was so cute. Well done. :)

[fantasyfruitbat.livejournal.com]

Thank you very much!!

[alovelycupoftea.livejournal.com]

So sweet! Draco's chocolate addiction was adorable!

[fantasyfruitbat.livejournal.com]

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!