Tables Turned

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 So, I'm just getting back into the writing scene, and wanted to get a bit of practice-smut in before the novel-length I'm writing gets to that point, so I've written a sequel to a drabble I wrote a very, very long time ago for the lovely enchanted_jae 's birthday. I'd appreciate any feedback anyone could offer.


Title:Tables Turned
Author:_meretricula
Summary: Malfoy sure knows how to take advantage of a situation...Birthday gift for Jae
Rating: NC-17
Length: 1602 words
Pairing(s): Harry/Draco
Warnings/Switching? No switching. Semi-dub con, some bondage, excessive use of italics to express emphasis. Also, a sequel to Turn the Tables, so reading that first might be a good plan.

Again, any feedback would be seriously appreciated, as I'm in the midst of writing a novel-length bottom!Draco fic and it's been quite a while since I've written.

Comments

[a-queen-bee.livejournal.com]

I'm sure novel length bottom!draco fic will be a rare treasure for this comm =) I'm rooting for you, fighting!

oh, and I noticed that you give clear tag on who's the bottom in your fics. I can't thank you enough for that *bow*

[http://users.livejournal.com/_meretricula/]

Haha, when I first started reading I didn't have a preference, but within like a year I got reeeally into bottom!Draco, to the point where I can't physically read top!Draco. That's when I started adding the bottom!tags to my recs list, and why I feel the need to mention it in the header to my fics. I'm sure there are plenty of people like me out there, and I need them to know they are not alone.

Also, your save-lists make me want to do some sort of graceful ballet-inspired happy dance with pigs and fluffy bunnies. Just sayin'.