Constructive Critiques Please?
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bottom_draco Hello, guys!
I was wondering if I can get some people with some time on their hands today to seriously review my work. Any sort of help on improvements is always appreciated but, be warned, it's a dark and often times disturbing fic.
Title: Malfoy Manor is Not Haunted
Author: Lady Vonne/ fckyeahwizangst
Word Count: 14 197
Warnings: Abuse, Violence, Disturbing themes, Mental Illness
Summary: One-shot Dark!Fic. Lucius Malfoy is determined to fix his broken son, for the War has turned him against his own father and now he's infected with the plague that will be his downfall. Mental-illness!Lucius, Abused!Draco
Author Notes: I'm planing a sequel that I'd like to post after I get more feedback on the first part. Please, if you have time, I'd love for you to check it out. Thank you very, very much. Constructive criticism is always appreciated, as well!
www.fanfiction.net/s/6883412/1/Malfoy_Manor_is_Not_Haunted
I was wondering if I can get some people with some time on their hands today to seriously review my work. Any sort of help on improvements is always appreciated but, be warned, it's a dark and often times disturbing fic.
Title: Malfoy Manor is Not Haunted
Author: Lady Vonne/ fckyeahwizangst
Word Count: 14 197
Warnings: Abuse, Violence, Disturbing themes, Mental Illness
Summary: One-shot Dark!Fic. Lucius Malfoy is determined to fix his broken son, for the War has turned him against his own father and now he's infected with the plague that will be his downfall. Mental-illness!Lucius, Abused!Draco
Author Notes: I'm planing a sequel that I'd like to post after I get more feedback on the first part. Please, if you have time, I'd love for you to check it out. Thank you very, very much. Constructive criticism is always appreciated, as well!
www.fanfiction.net/s/6883412/1/Malfoy_Manor_is_Not_Haunted
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