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nursedarry
Prompt: #52, Garden of Eden scene
Pairing(s): H/D
Summary: With this you get a lion who speaks Parseltongue, Voldesnake in a twisted Tree of Knowledge, and what I think the Creator really meant to happen. If you squint, you might also recall "The Blue Lagoon"".
Rating: NC17
Disclaimer: This work of fan-fiction is mine. The characters, such as they are, sadly are not. They are based upon characters created by JK Rowling, the rights to which are hers and WB's. No money, no harm, no foul.
Warning(s): Complete and utter finger-down-your-throat AU fluff. There is a minor character's death (but it's the baddie, so no biggie:).
Word Count: 11,355
Author's Notes: Prompter, many thanks for a wonderful concept! This fic started bizarrely and just kept getting more and more ridiculous, so I had to just follow where it led me. When I reread it, I was actually quite pleased. I hope you are too! Betas of awesomeness = DPS & CB!
In The Beginning
Author:
nursedarryPrompt: #52, Garden of Eden scene
Pairing(s): H/D
Summary: With this you get a lion who speaks Parseltongue, Voldesnake in a twisted Tree of Knowledge, and what I think the Creator really meant to happen. If you squint, you might also recall "The Blue Lagoon"".
Rating: NC17
Disclaimer: This work of fan-fiction is mine. The characters, such as they are, sadly are not. They are based upon characters created by JK Rowling, the rights to which are hers and WB's. No money, no harm, no foul.
Warning(s): Complete and utter finger-down-your-throat AU fluff. There is a minor character's death (but it's the baddie, so no biggie:).
Word Count: 11,355
Author's Notes: Prompter, many thanks for a wonderful concept! This fic started bizarrely and just kept getting more and more ridiculous, so I had to just follow where it led me. When I reread it, I was actually quite pleased. I hope you are too! Betas of awesomeness = DPS & CB!
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Date: 2009-10-08 10:22 pm (UTC)The innocence between them once they became human was just beautiful! Definitely reminded me of Blue Lagoon a little.
This was a really original idea, that you've executed really well.
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Date: 2009-11-14 07:12 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-10-08 10:36 pm (UTC)And I adored Harry roaring.
This fic made me happy and all warm inside and in awe of something that could have been mental is turned into a lovely story under your talented fingers.
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Date: 2009-11-14 07:12 am (UTC)Oh, and I originally wrote Harry purring, and then remembered lions don't purr! The bastards! Roaring isn't quite the same, but it still (almost) worked.
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Date: 2009-10-08 11:48 pm (UTC)Seriously, it was great
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Date: 2009-10-09 03:25 am (UTC)Then, for good measure, he rubbed the fruit's pulp up and down his torso before biting into it again.
That was a great line, I laughed aloud at that. Wonderful work!
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Date: 2009-10-09 06:55 am (UTC)Loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee it! <3
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Date: 2009-10-09 06:58 am (UTC)Amazing Adorable Awesome!!! > repeat in my head, again and again XD
I love exploration and ralationship between them.
Absolutely lovely ending!!
I really like this.
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Date: 2009-11-14 07:58 am (UTC)Bloody "a" key on this thing doesn't work!
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Date: 2009-10-09 07:53 pm (UTC)Lion!Harry and snake!Draco was WIN. And when they got turned to humans...;D Loved it~!
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