FEST FIC: In the Beginning - Harry/Draco (NC-17)

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Title: In The Beginning
Author: nursedarry
Prompt: #52, Garden of Eden scene
Pairing(s): H/D
Summary: With this you get a lion who speaks Parseltongue, Voldesnake in a twisted Tree of Knowledge, and what I think the Creator really meant to happen. If you squint, you might also recall "The Blue Lagoon"".
Rating: NC17
Disclaimer: This work of fan-fiction is mine. The characters, such as they are, sadly are not. They are based upon characters created by JK Rowling, the rights to which are hers and WB's. No money, no harm, no foul.
Warning(s): Complete and utter finger-down-your-throat AU fluff. There is a minor character's death (but it's the baddie, so no biggie:).
Word Count: 11,355
Author's Notes: Prompter, many thanks for a wonderful concept! This fic started bizarrely and just kept getting more and more ridiculous, so I had to just follow where it led me. When I reread it, I was actually quite pleased. I hope you are too! Betas of awesomeness = DPS & CB!

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Comments

[cassie-black12.livejournal.com]

Hon, I love this story now just as much as the first time I read it. Lion!Harry and Snake!Draco were perfect (though you did have me worried about the whole bestiality thing there for a minute *g*)

The innocence between them once they became human was just beautiful! Definitely reminded me of Blue Lagoon a little.

This was a really original idea, that you've executed really well.

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[nursedarry.livejournal.com]

You're too kind:) And never fear - I would never intentionally squick you!

[alovelycupoftea.livejournal.com]

I LOVE LOVE LOVE this. I love how Harry seeks friendship so simply even after a lifetime of being set apart. I love how Draco's words belie his actions. And I love, like Cassie said, the innocence of their human selves.

And I adored Harry roaring.

This fic made me happy and all warm inside and in awe of something that could have been mental is turned into a lovely story under your talented fingers.

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[nursedarry.livejournal.com]

And I LOVE LOVE LOVE you! Thanks again for being such a great cheerleader and friend!

Oh, and I originally wrote Harry purring, and then remembered lions don't purr! The bastards! Roaring isn't quite the same, but it still (almost) worked.

[ayurubie.livejournal.com]

ver well written.. love the exploration part. for a minute there i thought they were going to have lion-snake sex.. lol

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[nursedarry.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much for your comment! No, I draw the line at lion/snake sex:)

[piink-tequila.livejournal.com]

This was so cute! I love the ending. Great job!

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[nursedarry.livejournal.com]

LOL! I'm glad you liked it. I had such fun imagining it! Many thanks.

[alhena-mira.livejournal.com]

Awesome, what a dream Harry!
Seriously, it was great

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[nursedarry.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much for your lovely comment. How come I never have dreams like that? *grumbles* :)

[siniestramalfoy.livejournal.com]

Woooh!!! Awesome!! It was so funny and liht to read and the way yo take the prompt. Just really perfect!
<3<3<3

[nursedarry.livejournal.com]

Many thanks for the nice comment. I wasn't sure what to do with that prompt when I first saw it; I just knew I wanted it!

[bgreenwivy.livejournal.com]

I loved this...I mean loved this. It was well writtena dn just freakin fantastic. I don't even know what else to say but this was amazing.

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[nursedarry.livejournal.com]

HUGE LULS for reccing this on harrydraco! I did a double-take when I saw that, as no one has ever recc'd me there. I'm so glad you liked it!! That totally made my day!

[childsnatcher.livejournal.com]

I didn't know what to expect when I started reading, but I wasn't expecting such a masterpiece. Amazingly well written!

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[nursedarry.livejournal.com]

Many thanks for a wonderful comment! I'm glad it was a pleasant surprise:)

[joyceyhlin.livejournal.com]

It was a little bizarre at the beginning, but it turns out to be a fascinating story. I adore lion!Harry and snake!Draco, their interactions are innocent and beautiful at the same time. All in all, its a nice bedtime story for me. : )

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[nursedarry.livejournal.com]

Cheers for the nice comment. I love that you likened it to a bedtime story, as I had kinda thought of it that way when writing it:)

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[nursedarry.livejournal.com]

Oh, many ♥ for the sweet comment!

[megyal]

I smiled all through this, they were so THEM and so innocent at the same time.

Then, for good measure, he rubbed the fruit's pulp up and down his torso before biting into it again.

That was a great line, I laughed aloud at that. Wonderful work!

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[nursedarry.livejournal.com]

LOL! I love that you smiled through this - I had so much fun writing it! Thank you so much.

[anisaex.livejournal.com]

Adorable !!!!!
Loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee it! <3

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[nursedarry.livejournal.com]

Thaaaaaaaaannnkssss! I'm glad you liked it:)

[sasaa.livejournal.com]

How describe to you!?

Amazing Adorable Awesome!!! > repeat in my head, again and again XD

I love exploration and ralationship between them.

Absolutely lovely ending!!

I really like this.

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[nursedarry.livejournal.com]

OMG! Thank you so much for the amazing feedback! I'm really chuffed you liked this silly little story:)

[misplaced-exile.livejournal.com]

This was really great. So original, and such great descriptions! (And I was getting a bit of a 'Jungle Book' vibe from it too!) Definitely loved Harry and Draco after they had been turned into humans. So adorable!

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[nursedarry.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much for the comment! Yes, there was a Jungle Book element, definitley! *now singing King of the Swingers* hee hee:)

[monster-o-love.livejournal.com]

Wow!!! I don't think I've ever read anything like that before, it was completely BRILLIANT!!! I so adored snake!Draco and lion!Harry and their very different perceptions and ohhhhh ohhh!!! that they became such beautifully innocent and in love humans? I LOVED how that was written!!! Hee hee, such cute naive sex too! Mmmmm!!!! And the ending = ftw!!! :D

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[nursedarry.livejournal.com]

Gosh! Thank you SO much for that wonderful comment. I'm pleased that all of their personas worked for you. I had such good fun playing with them:)

[hangdab.livejournal.com]

Awesome! Original well-written... Thank you so much for such a good fic!

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[nursedarry.livejournal.com]

And thank YOU so much for a lovely comment! I'm glad you enjoyed it:)

Bloody "a" key on this thing doesn't work!

[likeasongsong.livejournal.com]

I love it!

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[nursedarry.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much for that! I'm pleased you liked it:)

[darkestnight12.livejournal.com]

The added on comic from The Far Side was a nice touch. And it all being a dream...*giggles* Rather genius of you, I think.

Lion!Harry and snake!Draco was WIN. And when they got turned to humans...;D Loved it~!

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[nursedarry.livejournal.com]

Ahhh! I'm chuffed someone liked that Far Side comic! It was a wee bit small, but I've always loved that one, and I thought it would be a nice touch. Thanks for the lovely comment!

[tigersilver.livejournal.com]

Totally could not look away from the screen - I think I read this without blinking once. I'm going to go read it again, yup, and then bookmark it and add it Memories and give you a 10/10, 5 stars, all gold, 'cause it was so excellent. Thanks for the Felix - you just made my day:>:>:>:>

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[nursedarry.livejournal.com]

Oh my goodness! I'm really pleased this moved you that much! I had such fun writing it. It was a joy to write, to be honest, it just kinda flowed out. (Not sure what that says about me... :/

[lonewhiterose.livejournal.com]

haha, excellent!! Oh my, this really was wonderful! I have so much I want to say about it, but...I'm just speechless! Great job, mystery author!

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[nursedarry.livejournal.com]

Love that icon:) Thank you so much for such amazing feedback! I'm really pleased you liked it.

[elsa12790.livejournal.com]

Delightful and inventive. Harry's loneliness at the beginning really touched me, and I was so glad that Draco, despite his snootiness, became his friend. I loved their slow discovery of each other's human bodies; mmm, very hot.

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[nursedarry.livejournal.com]

Thank you for reading and leaving such a lovely comment! I'm glad you enjoyed it:)

[sony-kit82.livejournal.com]

that was hilarious! it was so fluffy and just plain adorable. it was great how you managed to neatly tie the eden story with the whole harry potter universe. the experience of alienation and finding a home in the dream was so apt that it was emotional to see its parallels to harry's real life. i loved the playful tone and witty dialogue. plus harry and draco's experience of coming together and finding themselves in their new skin was humorous yet managed to maintain that aura of innocence even in the smutty parts, which by the way were just so adorable. harry and draco, no matter what form, really belong together. :D

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[nursedarry.livejournal.com]

Gosh! I wish I could write like YOU! What an amazingly eloquent and flattering comment:) Many thanks for reading...AND reviewing!

[hurdyburdy.livejournal.com]

This fic was delightful. Really enjoyed it. Snake Draco was really funny when he first met Lion Harry

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[nursedarry.livejournal.com]

Cheers for a lovely comment. I have such fun wriitng Draco. Cause he IS such a snake:)

[rubyemerald-1.livejournal.com]

This was so sweet. I loved Harry's character. So innocent and wide eyed and curious. All the things the Harry in my head is. And Draco's reactions to him. More than cute. I wasn't expecting the ending.

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[nursedarry.livejournal.com]

Many thanks for a lovely comment. It's wonderful to know that I can write a character as someone else sees him! Thank you so much:)

[serilla.livejournal.com]

So it was a dream - one crazy, sweet dream. Lion Harry and Snake Draco - so cute. Great story. :)

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[nursedarry.livejournal.com]

Cheers for a lovely comment! I'm glad you enjoyed it! *Am waiting to have dream like that*