WIP recs

[roneviacake.livejournal.com]

here are some WIP fics that I have been reading. Just thought I share them.

Title: Flirt
Author:xErised
Rating: T
Pairing: Harry/Draco
Wordcount:36,665
Summary: Draco finally decides to give Harry a set of rules and two months, nothing more and nothing less, to court him. But Harry had never expected it to be such a challenge... Post-Hogwarts. HP/DM
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5667456/1/Flirt

Title: An Angels Wrath
Author:RedOneTwoThree
Rating: M
Pairing: Harry/Draco
Wordcount: 16,914
Summary: When an 11 year old Draco shows up at godrics hallow with no memory of who or where he is the potter family must choose whether to help him or turn him in. slash! Full summary inside!
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5782031/1/An_Angels_Wrath

Comments

[zoryatwist.livejournal.com]

So we are in the same time zone, cool

it is wonderful to find an author so open to critique, belive me that is a rare thing, especially in someone as young as you, just shows that your potential is indeed far greater than most

anyway i would never presume that you changed your story,
i'm sorry to have phrased myself so poorly,
your plotline just takes a few hurried steps in certain moments that work badly with the pace of the developement

it happens, i've seen many writers who came back to their old stories years later, adding a few paragraphs, or a chapter even to make it all flow more smoothly

i didn't even expect you to do that, just wanted to show you where an experienced reader would find things out of rhythm

thanks for giving me a bit of hope, sometimes i despair of the HP fandom as so many young authors these days are simply horrid (as original writers and as receivers of critique)

have a nice day

[roneviacake.livejournal.com]

Just to give warning... the second fic is really hurried and jumbled, but I think if the author slows down it could have potential.

Just a warning.^^