[Fic] Servile

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Title: Servile
Author: calrissian18 
Rating: NC-17
Pairing:  Harry/Draco, others mentioned.
Summary: “I would love anything you gifted me, My Lord, but this,” silver eyes, the same shade as the dragon that marked Harry's arm, glinted in his direction, “is exquisite.”
Bottom!Draco: Yes
Word Count: 76,000+ (20 chapters)
Status: Complete
Warnings: Slave, Violence, Angst galore, Dark!fic
A/N: This is a slave story that does not follow the normal route but veers somewhat dramatically from the beaten path *winces* please don't hate me for that.  But I despise the normal storyline where the slave is treated like scum, eventually derives some sort of pleasure from his punishments and ends up falling for his captor.  Who, naturally, alternately discovers his own feelings and tries to make a normal life for them.  Fine for a one-time read, however, as you reach the sixtieth variation of this it gets a bit stale.  Besides, I have never thought Draco capable of that much evil.  I can only hope I've provided an original (and enjoyable) take on a rather set storyline.

Chapter 1: A Gift
Chapter 20: The End

Comments

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OMG I was a mess by the time I reached the last chapter. For one, I'm the kind of person who hardly ever cries while watching/reading anything angst-laden. I don't believe I've ever cried at the movies (ever!)... no matter how sad or touching the story. I'd feel wretched, yes. But cry? Nuh uh, I couldn't. The tears just wouldn't come.

But omgomgomg by your Chapter 9, I was biting my fist and sniffling terribly.... Chapter 14 had me sobbing my eyes out and almost squashing my (confused) pet cat in a weak attempt to ease the ache in my chest, while trying to breathe through my nose (leaking with tears-induced snot). And yet, I find myself unable to bloody stop reading already! And so, by the time I reached the last chapter, you have single-handedly reduced me into a whimpering puddle of teary goo.

*sniff sniff* I have never cried so badly (hey, this is my first time!) and yet felt so very contented with... well, everything I've read and felt for, from the first chapter to the last. You officially have my deepest respect for that. *hugs you*

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Is it about Draco more then harry? I am kind of tired of seeing harry in the spot light.